I. Love. You.
For realz, yo.

I really like how you are doing the shoes on Spiff, first off, they look really good. His overall pose is crazy! Like, "Bring it on!" Very cool. Great muscle work.
You character Jade is awesome! (because I can't spell exsquisite...?) I like the costuming. The light bits of armor are looking very nice. Her pose is amazing as well!

Weapons. Hell yeah. Very cool work going on here. I hope you continue to endeavor to finish this!

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More than a voice, less than reason.

Im loving the action and the characters!... ...I love Spiff...hes so hot!....lol..and of course Jade is just as awsome!..anyway the postion on Jade is brilliant...Im loving that you are not afraid to put the body into any postition you please.......you have an amazing understanding of space and proportion...and for a sketch this is great! Im not sure if Jade is a calm or focused ..but her face seems expressionless for a battle position.....you might just squint the eyes a little bit or something to make it seem like shes moving...but beautiful job....I wish I was Jade.... Spiff is quite the bass ass here as well....nice shoes!...ode to his creator the master of shoes!...awsome stance....and I love the "animal" you brought to him...Im not too good with weapons...and I love it here...but it seems "off" somehow....the sword should follow the knuckle line?....I think I know what you were going for...you might just spread his fingers a bit to show that they are going down the length of the "hilt" (is that what its called??) or you could bring the sword coming more forward toward us...coming out of that palm instead from behind it?...I guess Im not sure.....Im the worst at giving critiques ...I never know if I make sense...or if I have something valid to say.......overall Im thrilled that your doing something like this....and you always bring such an elegant and sophisticated feel to your characters that is just wonderful....keep it up...

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Ow! It's great dude .
I mean it has style, and the best part of it, it has a personal style.
This will be really good when you clean-up and paint .

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"A vida é arte do encontro, embora haja tanto desencontro pela vida"

Can't stop looking at the Lion's pose, great anatomy as well

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HanabiFestival.com

thanks. they're your shoes though. I tried to be as accurate to your design as I could. I'll go ink the original this weekend if I can find my rapidograph (if it still works!)

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I am Bahamut,
King of the Dragons,
Bring me proof of your courage
to receive the honor due true Warriors.

Fantastic critique, as expected. thanks.

Jade's a monk, she's always focused ^^. I'll make her slight smile a little more apparent on the cleanup. Your comment about spiff's hand is totally valid. I felt it was bad, but got lazy. It will be reworked.

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I am Bahamut,
King of the Dragons,
Bring me proof of your courage
to receive the honor due true Warriors.

thanks ^^

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I am Bahamut,
King of the Dragons,
Bring me proof of your courage
to receive the honor due true Warriors.

Thanks. I'd better do good anatomy, or Marjan will slay me. ^^

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I am Bahamut,
King of the Dragons,
Bring me proof of your courage
to receive the honor due true Warriors.

exquisite*

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I am Bahamut,
King of the Dragons,
Bring me proof of your courage
to receive the honor due true Warriors.